Draft of Whispers in the Night
In a small town, the old clock in the square stopped ticking. People whispered about it, wondering if something supernatural had happened. Detective Sarah Reeves arrived to investigate. She found clues leading her to an abandoned house on the outskirts of town. As she searched inside, she heard whispers and footsteps. Suddenly, she was trapped. The clock's hands began moving again as a figure appeared from behind one of the walls.
Draft Review of Whispers in the Night
The draft provides a clear mystery setup, but could benefit from more tension and detail. Consider adding descriptions to enhance the eerie atmosphere and provide clearer motivation for Sarah Reeves' actions. The supernatural element needs to be better integrated into the plot for coherence. Overall, keep it concise within 200-500 words.