Draft of Quest for Cleansing
In the heart of the mystical forest, under the ancient oaks, lived four unlikely friends: Elara, the young wizard; Zephyr, the swift falcon; Thorne, the wise old tree spirit; and Lyra, the clever rabbit. One day, a wicked sorcerer cast a spell that turned the kingdom's water into poison. The only way to break the curse was to find the legendary Crystal of Cleansing, said to be hidden deep within an enchanted cave guarded by a fierce dragon.
Draft Review of Quest for Cleansing
Great start! The narrative sets an intriguing premise. Consider adding more details about each character's role in their quest and how they might interact with one another. Also, include some foreshadowing or hints at the potential challenges ahead to maintain suspense.