Draft of Diary of Stars
It was a quiet evening when Sarah received the mysterious package. Curiosity piqued, she opened it to find an old diary filled with cryptic entries. The handwriting seemed familiar yet unknown. As she delved deeper into the pages, strange symbols appeared, leading her to realize that someone had been watching her for years. Each entry was a piece of a larger puzzle, hinting at secrets buried in plain sight. Sarah felt a chill run down her spine as she realized the diary might contain more than just memories-it could be key to solving an unsolved mystery from decades ago.
Draft Review of Diary of Stars
The story has a good start, building curiosity through Sarah receiving an old diary. However, more details are needed to establish the setting and character background. The mysterious symbols could be better integrated into the narrative to create tension. Additionally, the realization of someone watching her for years feels sudden without prior foreshadowing.