Draft of Redemption's Flame
A draft of a 200-500 word short story about Fantasy with the theme of redemption. The story revolves around a wizard who has been ostracized for his past mistakes but is given a second chance to save the kingdom from an ancient evil.
Draft Review of Redemption's Flame
The draft needs more detail and development. The current text only provides an overview of the plot. Consider adding descriptions, dialogue, and internal monologues to bring the characters and world to life. Also, ensure the theme of redemption is explored through specific actions and decisions made by the wizard.