Draft of Magic's Keeper
In a far-off kingdom, where magic flowed like rivers and shadows danced at dusk, there lived a young girl named Elara. Orphaned at an early age, she was sent to the castle by her cruel aunt to be nothing more than a servant. However, Elara harbored dreams of adventure and magic, vowing to find her own path in life.
Draft Review of Magic's Keeper
The opening sets up an intriguing scenario but needs more depth. Elara's character could benefit from a clearer motivation or conflict. The magical world feels underdeveloped, lacking specific details that would enhance the setting. Consider adding more dialogue, internal monologue, and action to bring Elara's journey to life.