Draft of Time's Gambit
In the year 2045, time travel had become a reality. Dr. Samantha Reeves was one of its pioneers, having spent decades working on the project. The day she activated the machine and stepped into history was both exhilarating and daunting.
Draft Review of Time's Gambit
The opening sets up an intriguing premise, but more context about Dr. Reeves and the time machine would make it clearer why this moment is significant. Additionally, some suspense or conflict could be introduced to engage the reader further. For example, what challenges did she face during development? What was her goal for the first trip through time?