Draft of Time's Dilemma
In the year 2075, humanity had mastered the art of time travel. The technology was groundbreaking but also controversial. Dr. Elena Martinez, a brilliant physicist and dedicated researcher, worked tirelessly to ensure that time travel would be used for good. One fateful day, she discovered a hidden portal leading back to ancient Egypt. Her heart raced as she prepared to embark on this unprecedented journey.
Draft Review of Time's Dilemma
The opening scene sets up an intriguing premise, but it needs more development. Consider adding details about Dr. Martinez's background or the technology behind time travel to create a richer narrative. Additionally, introduce some conflict or tension early on to engage the reader. The story is currently too brief; consider expanding the plot and character interactions to reach the desired word count. Ensure the writing style remains professional and engaging.